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| Ah! My creation! My masterpiece! What will my public think? |
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| hmm, how can I say this? |
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| I like what you did with the roof pattern, |
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| and the taste and texture is not bad... |
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| but if you remove some of this... |
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| and maybe add something... |
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| Ah! Voila! See, much better, no? |
